User Reviews For: Naive Slut's Unrequited Love -Girly Boy Delivery's Blindfold Play

The two stories were somewhat ok, nothing impressive. But the translation seemed to be all over the place. Sometimes there were words like pronouns missing, the sentence would end in the middle with a period just to be continued 3 panels later on. Most of the time I didn't even understand who was saying what. That ruined the whole experience for me. Can't recommend

I would have given this 3-4 stars because the second story wasn't my cup of tea, and the teacher creeped me out (and I'm usually unfazed by most things). But the translation is so awful that I'm rating this 1 star… I can't even tell if it was machine translated or not because there were just missing pronouns and missing commas all over the place. It made the second story especially more difficult to read. I got this on sale, so I don't regret buying it, but I really need to reread an old favorite after this to cleanse my eyes.