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onsenegg's Reviews & Ratings

2021-03-23
The story is cute but the concept of growing brothers only to have sex with them (?) was kind of odd. It's a nice one shot and I like the author.But what really put me off was how bad the typesetting and translating was. For a oneshot I didn't really understand what was going on until halfway through because of the way things were phrased and bubbles were in the wrong order. The way the text was put in was really distracting and not natural at all and kind of peeved me. I kind of expected that by purchasing the series there would be a certain quality here but clearly that's not the case.