It's a very good story. My only real issue *spoilers alert* is that after kissing her and she runs away, the next scene with them together they are talking normally. There is no proposal, but it goes straight to him asking the emperor permission to marry her which had me thinking 'did anyone bother to actually Ask the bride to be if she wanted to get married????'. Then they are preparing for marriage. It really spoils the ending, makes it weird, potentially no-consenting, and makes you go 'wtf?'. I tried imagining a scene where they talk it out and he proposes after she flees from him kissing her, and before the following scene, and that makes the ending make much more sense, be consensual, and makes it romantic, not weird and awkward. So good story, but wtf is that end to the romance part? *end spoiler.*

Cute so far. I'm glad that the protagonist finally gets a chance to be appreciated. Her old kingdom didn't deserve her. May it wither to dust. I can't wait to read more.

Very sweet and sexy. My only issue is that Sana is hard to read in the beginning (a good poker face), so even though he clearly likes Hana before their first time, it feels a bit sudden that he's cool with sleeping with her, even though it's the abstinence moon making him randy. Like they are still only aquainences, maybe friends, and he may or may not like her that way. Of course, her arriving during the absence moon made them getting together eventually be obvious, and thats fine, but even in heat I feel like he would have taken more care to avoid tempting situations. Also Hana admits she's a virgin, but then she just cavalierly decides to sleep with him. At least with her she made it plain that she thought he was hot, and was clearly falling for him, but if it was more realistic, she would have at least hesitated a bit before deciding to go ahead with it.I like how Sana insinuated he wants to marry her. Super cute. I just wonder what their kids would look like.

Cute story. I wish the smut was hardcore though.