ForgottenQuill's Reviews & Ratings

This was really wonderful. It's the first time I've read a yaoi with a three-some! My only problem is that the older guy is the most unattractive man I've seen in a manga in a long time. He actually seems to get worse looking as the book goes on. It was really kind of annoying considering that Yuma is VERY cute. Considering the whole three-some and BDSM, it should be an automatic 5, but since they've edited everything to death, it really takes a good imagination to "see" anything. Plus I found the dialogue to be rather subpar, especially during sex. Would have been 100% better had this been unedited, but the Asian government has to be so f'ing prudes---sometimes I wonder if it's worth throwing money at what is essentially an unfinished book. A*Holes.
I was looking forward to this, but it was very short and I think something got lost in translation along the way. Either way, it could have been way better -- disappointed.
This was excellent--an erotic spin to the Omegaverse is always a good thing.
Wow, now THAT is some high-quality, well-drawn erotic yaoi. Instantly addictive!
How can a story with such a great premise go so very wrong? Fill every page with senseless, confusing imagery and top it off with lame dialogue and repetitive moping. This was so disappointing, you have no idea. I thought the premise was very promising and the story started out okay, but the main character turned out to be this annoying man child (and not in the cute way). I'm sure there are some who really loved this, but I cannot even appreciate it as unredeeming smut. The layout is so convoluted and the story SO awful, I couldn't even appreciate the sex scenes. If you want the least sexy and unseductive smut out there, then pick up this. When sex isn't sexy and you have me skipping through the porn looking for some semblance of order, you know you've made a mistake somewhere. Do yourself a favor and steer clear!
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