ForgottenQuill's Reviews & Ratings

I don't know. From the summary and other reviews, I was expecting something something a lot sexier and happier. But this was....depressing. I'm sorry, I read my yaoi for a different reason than this manga was presenting. I read the whole thing, which I felt was really poorly paced, and just grew to hate the "oh so pretty" blond. He emotionally toys with the guy in his bar and makes him feels like shit for falling in love. He's an asshole and so were all his asshole friends. They all gang up on his guy, calling him "funny" for being so emotional. I would have punched them all if I could and then told the brunette he deserves so much better than their mind games. Still, the manga was boring and too slow given the material. I think a much better and much sexier yaoi could have been written. This was just a waste of time.
This was really wonderful. It's the first time I've read a yaoi with a three-some! My only problem is that the older guy is the most unattractive man I've seen in a manga in a long time. He actually seems to get worse looking as the book goes on. It was really kind of annoying considering that Yuma is VERY cute. Considering the whole three-some and BDSM, it should be an automatic 5, but since they've edited everything to death, it really takes a good imagination to "see" anything. Plus I found the dialogue to be rather subpar, especially during sex. Would have been 100% better had this been unedited, but the Asian government has to be so f'ing prudes---sometimes I wonder if it's worth throwing money at what is essentially an unfinished book. A*Holes.
I was looking forward to this, but it was very short and I think something got lost in translation along the way. Either way, it could have been way better -- disappointed.
This was excellent--an erotic spin to the Omegaverse is always a good thing.
Wow, now THAT is some high-quality, well-drawn erotic yaoi. Instantly addictive!
How can a story with such a great premise go so very wrong? Fill every page with senseless, confusing imagery and top it off with lame dialogue and repetitive moping. This was so disappointing, you have no idea. I thought the premise was very promising and the story started out okay, but the main character turned out to be this annoying man child (and not in the cute way). I'm sure there are some who really loved this, but I cannot even appreciate it as unredeeming smut. The layout is so convoluted and the story SO awful, I couldn't even appreciate the sex scenes. If you want the least sexy and unseductive smut out there, then pick up this. When sex isn't sexy and you have me skipping through the porn looking for some semblance of order, you know you've made a mistake somewhere. Do yourself a favor and steer clear!
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