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ElsT's Reviews & Ratings

2020-05-12
Really cute, feel-good story. Hardly any smut, but that didn't bother me as it suited the story. Agree with previous reviewer that the romantic storyline of the secondary characters is rushed and unfinished, and I was not as emotionally invested in their relationship as that of the main characters. That storyline is completely in chapters 3 and 4 (and then not mentioned at all in chapter 5, which was weird), so if you're only interested in the main pairing those chapters cuold easily be skipped. Giving this a 4 because the main storyline is really sweet and lighthearted and I really enjoyed reading it.
2020-05-11
I like the concept for this story, and the art is really good, but it's very rushed and there's a lot of dialogue, even in the sex scenes, which is distracting. I think this would be a lot better if it was just a little longer, so the relationship between the two characters could be better developed, but overall this was an enjoyable read.