I liked the concept and characters but the story itself jumped around a lot it. It felt a little jerky, it went from one thing to another with no transition so it was a little hard to read. So basically the pacing was bad, I think they tried to cram too much into too little pages.

This felt like a waste of Tickets, based off the sample I was expecting something completely different. This feels more like it was intended for men then women. If your looking for something about a women awakening as a masochist and becoming a sex slave for men by night, then sure read this.