It wasn't something great but it wasn't bad either. The story line didn't flow well and seemed as though it was a much larger story chopped up into pieces getting rid of a lot of middle ground information that would make the story more coherent. I get the page limit idea but this story should probably not have been so short.

This story was incredibly adorable! I didn't know what to expect but really, I highly recommend reading this!

Absolutely fantastic! So much going on here. I couldn't recommend it more strongly!

Good story, but the reason for the initial abandonment is not divulged upon in full and leaves me thinking that part might have been rushed. Still, I would definitely recommend this one.

Really cute and sexy! I alternate between wishing these characters were real so I could punch them, and wishing they were real so I could hug them! I want moar?