The plot sucks. The concept was indeed interesting but the author wasn't able to use that concept to its full capabilities. This story lacks conflict or thrill, and always focuses on the sex scene. Its also a bit fast paced. But the art was good, could been better if they took out the censor. I could think alot of possible plots and outcomes for this story and make this a dark psychological smut but that would be too much drama and I think the author wants to avoid that.