User Reviews For: The Demanding Author and the Fledgling's One-sided Love

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2023-07-17
KnittedChaos Rating
Cute and realistic kind of love instead of the illogical and dangerous idealised/fetishised romanticism that is rampant in the BL/Yaoi genre is a huge bonus for me. But, where are the quality control people and the proofreader? Seriously, there are so many missing words, bizarre "can't decide on the verb tense so we'll use both" and extra letters changing the word to something wrong, it's hard to believe the copy was approved. This needs ago-over and some grammar adjustments, then it's five stars.