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PassionDevourer's Reviews & Ratings

The stories are really sweet and heartwarming. I'd love to see follow-up volumes featuring move of the dynamic between those two. The mystery they bait us with is fun too.
I love the dynamic of the characters. Looking forward to what comes next.
That was really cute.
This was a really cool idea and a fun ride throughout. Love the chemistry too. Good work and thank you for the treat.
It seems like there are two stories here, but they are both part of the same universe. I personally like the second story more, but the first would have more potential if it wasn't so rushed.
It's quite a fascinating story so far. Very steamy and the plot seems to be going in quite the interesting direction. I can't wait to see how certain elements play out.
This is such a unique premise. I'd really like to see it explored further in future volumes. My main concern is that the characters don't seem as well-developed as they should be, so I'm worried that the story will be less interesting the longer it continues. In the meantime though, I look forward to seeing more in the future.
The concept is interesting, but the first chapter is difficult to get into. It seemed to start with a flashforward before immediately switching to a scene that didn't set up the story very well. It felt more like opening the door and interrupting something than a beginning, which made adjusting to the story a bit difficult. From there, the remainder of the chapter felt rather rushed. I think the first several pages would have been better served to assist the exposition and smooth out the story a bit better.
Hahaha! That last page is just the best! Really entertaining story. I like how it differed from my expectations and I definitely recommend. If I have any nitpick, I would've like to learn a little more about the bartender's life, but as is I am quite satisfied.
It's a cute story, but I feel like it could have used more character development than was provided for us. As it stood by the end of the story, I did not feel a strong investment in the character's struggles and the end felt unearned. Personally, I think that simplifying the plot and keeping it to just one or two points of conflict would have helped with character growth. There were parts that felt like filler content and could have been written differently to have better relevance to the story. I do not regret reading it, but it can use some improvements.