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thewritinggirl's Reviews & Ratings

2022-11-07
Why. Can't. The. Male. Lead. Ever. Keep. It. In. His. PANTS?!!?!? Like seriously this story was worth 5 stars up until the point he sleeps with someone else despite claiming he loves his girlfriend. UGH. I'm writing this review after ch20, I just hope it's all resolved okay. Everything else is great though, good art, good story, good smut, good angst.
2022-11-07
Okay soooo the step-bro is VERY forceful. Like for the first 5 chapters it felt like he was forcing himself on her. It was the cliché story of a guy teasing the girl he likes. But the last chapter was great, plus the art is so good
2022-11-07
YAY MORE OF RYU AND RIKU these two are so cute, this author is amazing and I love all their works. There's even a whole amazing angst bit in this one but it all ends perfectly, DEFINITELY worth the money (and of course there's lots of hawt smuuut)
2022-11-07
I love this author soooo much, I read The Trail of His Fingertips first and I'm glad I did because the stories intertwine loosely (Ryo makes his debut in that manga whilst the two main characters in it feature in Melty Kisses). Anyway Melty Kisses is soooo good, Ryo and Riku are perfect and so cute, there's plenty of smut and the story is brilliant. I'd give it more than 5 stars is I could
2022-11-06
Sooo pretty and sweet and hot and you can see the true love they have for each other-I kinda somehow manage to look past the fact they're TWINS and just focus on their relationship...
2022-11-05
I didn't particularly enjoy the old man moments but it was great on the whole. The way the relationship between the 2 main characters evolved plus all the mini stories surrounding the café was great. Gorgeous art and VERY hot scenes
2022-11-05
If I could give it more stars I would. So DRAMATIC, so HOT, so CUTE, literally the full package. I cannot recommend it enough, so worth the money, it's now one of my favourites
2022-11-05
A lot of DRAMA. Realistically not much happens between the two main characters before they get together but it was still an alright story I'd say
2022-11-04
The art is so pretty and the characters are adorable, plus there were plenty of hot scenes. My only issue is that whenever something remotely bad happens it is always the guys fault, even if it's the girl that's done something wrong. That really frustrated me, it just seemed as though he was constantly apologising for things she'd overreacted to- it just got too repetitive
2022-11-04
Sooo Takenashi is very forceful. Like, VERY forceful. Made me a little uncomfortable in the beginning but as the chapters went on Akemi, the straight guy, began to realise his feelings. It's a good story, but I just think Takenashi was a little too intense