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Crookshanks25's Reviews & Ratings

2021-04-15
If you're here for yaoi, walk away. This won't satisfy you. Now onto the review: I loved this story! It was cute, well paced and unique! It wasn't a rehash of a trope you've read a million times (I love those too) but actually something new. Even in the world of gender swap books, it was different! I love the characters as well. The whole story was very sweet and fluffy. My only criticism is that there should have been more time with Hibiki as a man. Almost all of their intimate moments happen when Hibiki is a woman. Sometimes it feels like the story skips weeks just so Hibiki can be a girl most of the time. Why? Hibiki is supposed to be accepted as both sexes so why does the story focus more on Hibiki as a girl? That's the only reason I docked a star. The sex scenes could have been elaborated a bit but I still love them. Overall, this story is adorable and I love it!
2021-01-14
I was drawn in by the threesome premise. It's not something you see often but I enjoy reading. A real relationship with three people instead of a one off orgy. The sex scenes aren't the best but they're good. That's the only thing going for it though. The story isn't well written. The dialogue is weird, the characters don't feel like real people and the story is absurd. I really wanted to like it cause the premise is great! You can definitely have a loving, sexual relationship between three people but this manga hasn't captured it.
2021-01-02
The first chapter was interesting but the rest were very disappointing. I dislike stories where the main character suffers throughout the whole story just to get nothing at the end. Based off the premise and picture, I was expecting some sort of threesome or at least a 4th person would show up so you would end with 2 couples of 2. This is the only story I haven't reread or downloaded onto the app. I have at least 40 stories downloaded at the time of writing this comment.
2020-12-23
I appreciate that the main character is so open with her sexual desires. It's probably my favorite thing about the series. Her forward, no nonsense approach is very refreshing and somewhat empowering. I also enjoyed the sex scenes. Unfortunately, the story seems to loose itself after the 3rd chapter. The main male lead goes from sexy to inconsiderate jerk. Still unable to call her anything but her stage name by the end of the series. Even though she doesn't want that!
2020-12-18
What did I just read? The detective/kidnapper is dumb so that the criminal easily tricks the detective. Not in a fun, sexy way but a confusing, anticlimactic way. The detective stalks the criminal for years so that he can... immediately give up? There's surprisingly little passion for a story that sounds like it should have years worth of emotion built up.
2020-11-06
Although the premise isn't anything new, it drew me in because I love single dads being courted by hot young men. That's the only good thing about this story unfortunately. My biggest complaint is that the main characters have no chemistry with each other. I love stories with lots of smut but it doesn't matter if there's no chemistry. My second biggest complaint is how often they perform sexual acts in front of the three year old boy. I don't care if you do it on the couch or bathroom, but not when your son is literally in your arms. Save that for when the boy is at his grandma's house. Honestly, I think this story would have worked better as a straight couple. At least the Seme's anger when the uke met with his guy friends would have made sense. And the fact the uke had boobs would have made sense too. Seriously, why did he need boobs? This is supposed to be yaoi! Overall, I'm glad I only rented it for 48 hours.