I just really thought that a short story for 4 tokens might be a winner.. honestly, I felt a little disappointed by this. Maybe I was expecting too much ... ehh it was one of those short spicy where ehh it was okay. the story line is just okay. I didn't really like the characters. I personally don't think it's worth its 4 token value.

This is a pretty typical tutor x tutee (?) story which is why I think spending that many tokens can be hard to decide if it is worth reading or not. However, I do think the story is cute (and sexy ;) ) and everything worked out in a nicely in the end.

I didn't think this was very sexy, and I found the story line to be a little on the dull side. For me, it was not a read again story.

it's a completed short story. no real plot. just creepy ending. just a story about a psycho stalker. that's really all there was to it. there wasn't really a plot. it ends abruptly. story might have been good if it was longer ... to tell a story ... to define the characters more... but it isn't longer. not worth buying.

I agree with the previous post. it's a short spicy love so there really isn't a plot. and the story is just confusing... I was just never sure when she was imagining the guy or if it was the real guy. Honestly, I just don't think it's worth that many tokens.

honestly, I was not a fan of this. basically she, who has been poor her whole life, finds out she has a rich grandfather and inherited his company. However, she needed to carry on the bloodline so the males in the company are all over her. I just felt miserable for her. I mean the story is happy at the very end... I suppose....however, 90 percent of the story before the end just made you feel sorry for her.

off the scale sexy. so so so sexy. forbidden love -- step dad and step daughter. they face a ton of obstacles during the course of their forbidden love, but they resolve it and move on with a ton of sexy time. to the world, they are father and daughter, and they are trying to keep it that way right now. However, we just met another character that could expose them...can this time be easily resolved so that their sexyyy time can keep going... well I sure hope so ;)

Well first off, It's a short story that is 20 something pages so It's a rushed story. I don't regret reading, but I also could have not read it and been okay. The a sexy scenes were okay... a little crazy and wild at the bar... but ... eh... this story was just okay.

the art is great. the characters -- both the characters are absolutely lovable. rich guy saves the self sacrificing call girl. the story -- there is a story line. their love is kind of cute and a little clumsy but still super sexy. It makes me smile.

If you're looking for a story that has no real plot... just sexy scenes. This may be for you. I didn't really think the sexy scenes were all that appealing. The art is just okay. Like I said, there is no real story. Just a short story about a 3 delivery guys collecting their payment with her body since she doesn't have the money.