User Reviews For: Secret Babysitter -Taking Care of a Grown-Up Man's Sexual Desire-


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retardedapplejuice Rating
As expected of a "oneshot", the story is cramped into a few pages - 32, including the "covers" (so really, just 29 for the actual story). However, this one is so short, it's easily noticeable how the story jumps from one point to the next without proper transition, which makes this a bit difficult to follow from just one read. Still, the art is decent. The naughty bits aren't very stimulating given how rushed the whole thing is. I was dumbfounded after reading this. I couldn't believe it was already over.
ebookrenta0z1y3016k Rating
It could have been good, but the writing is weak and the story needs some improvement.
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