Short, hands on, plays out nice in the end. Something for in between, don't know if more chapters follow.

Sweet. Short. Only two chapters. Would like to read more.

sweet story. Diabetes ahead.

I expected from the title and picture a sweet story of the pairs.There is no story, no development, they are already together and get it on, ok I thought, then smut: but there is no art (bodies) you can admire (simple drawing, the expressions on the faces were cute), and what is drawn hides behind so many "noises" and talkbubbles, you don`t even see what`s going on. Half or partly even a third of that would have been enough.I don`t mind simple art, if I get a cute story, and I don't mind smut only, if the art and especially the bodies is accordingly good. I regret buying this. Cute expressions on faces alone are not enough.

Reread it the third time now. Still cute. Still nice art. Still nice story. One of the best.

Nice, cute, fluffy, drama, steam, all in the story. What's lacking? One main point: Wish the evil ones would be punished. One or two chapters more, maybe with more steam, would be nice too. May we get a sequel?

The two chapters are a good beginning, it's a promising plot, but as before stated, there needs to be more chapters with more developement and other things. It is not satisfying as it is.

Naivity, cluelessness, misunderstandings, awkwardness, cluelessness, more misunderstandings, covered in a sweet glaze of sugar. cute art. could be more story. feels like a dream.

Title is program. Two and a half pairs in three intertwinged stories, many emotions, not always fulfilled, expect no smut. This is definitifly too short for that price.

This can't be completed. The story has merely started. So promising. Where is the rest? I expect at least three or more chapters.